This is the best place to go if you want to comment and continue the story: https://aryion.com/iss/page.php?page=1&story=1213
This will help me to keep things organized. You can respond to what I have everywhere else but that page linked above on Aryion is where I'll be posting the newest updates.
I won't post a big update of the story to other sites until a significant amount of the story went ahead.