Just a heads up to anyone who may be interested, I have now revised chapters 1 and 2 of my original adult fiction, Goats and Witches. I corrected some of the grammar as well as smoothed the dialog over in some areas. Hopefully it flows a bit better now! I will eventually do the same for chapter 3 but I think I am going to put a pin in that so I can start writing the next new chapter in my spare time. So expect to see that in the near future...