What would you all think if I changed "The Linen Butterfly's" title to "The Lark Ascending?"

Somehow it seems to fit better, if I make some very, VERY superficial changes I can accommodate it and it works on a couple levels.

The name is taken from an Edwardian poem, and from the tone poem by Ralph Vaughan Williams it inspired.

This piece of music was written and debuted in the spring of 1914, just before the outbreak of WWI. Yes, that is significant to the story.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tzONNtE_WqM