Stepping away from this script was a mistake. Two days was long enough to start lapsing into depression and forgetting just how good my draft really was.

I decided to do some work tonight to keep from going any further into depression. I added some much-needed tweaks to the beginning and now it's even better.

Some time in the next week Kobi and I will go over it together, reading lines out loud to see how they sound and making notes about dialogue and anything that needs to be fixed.

By the way, this has become something of a theme song for this project:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IcJWia01aa8[