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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 14 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 14 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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Here he is! "Nite" Lubo. That's what I'm calling him for now.

I like how the "ドーン" behind the turned out. However that, and the shading on panel 4 and the dark blue arua in panel 1, caused me to have a lot of layers and get myself confused for a while.

Lubo for now has blue text in his speech bubbles for reasons I will go into later. For now, all you need to know is that his voice sounds different now.

In case I didn't explain it before, ドーン, reads as "doon" and is used for a big impact.

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    It's very... Dragonquest. Like, even the intimidating things are rounded and cute. It's kind of adorable, really.

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      Lol I actually never got to play Dragonquest