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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 5 (Animated Link in Desc) by JomoOval (critique requested)
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Tried yet another new thing. I decided that speech bubbles don't
necessarily have to stay in their panels as long as it's not too confusing.
To be honest, I'm not sure if this worked out.
There are some empty spaces left in some panels.
Panel 6 was going to just have Lubo facing the left.
But the speech bubble was becoming too big, even with my having bubbles be outside of panels.
So I decided to draw a view of the village instead. Since that's what Auda's talking about.
Animating was a lot different for me this time due to using different tools.
Spriter to be exact. www.brashmonkey.com/spriter.ht…
But they were very handy. I had only layer for the text and characters,
had the tail move underneath. And underneath that was the background layers.
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Az_the_Owl
Oh good good good! An establishing shot of the setting. "Village" is vague, but gives us something to work with in terms of imagining the world around us. The weakness here continues to be a complete lack of backgrounds, but everyone has their strong points and weak points so I can't say too much about it.
Her HUGE hands are just all over the place, aren't they? XD