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Fallen by ZirDarkfire (critique requested)

"Fallen"

I am a fallen angel
My tears are so long dry
My wings are burnt with fire
I - never again - will fly.

I cannot stand up straight
In broken glass I kneel
The burden of my life
So hopeless makes me feel.

Abysmal is my fate
There is no coming bliss
And thus I will abate
My life I shall not miss.

Fallen (critique requested)

ZirDarkfire

A little poem I had in my mind. One of the few I've written in English.

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