Breakdowns - Short Story by zippypuzzles

Breakdowns - Short Story

zippypuzzles

21 May 2015 at 09:22:26 MDT

Comments and critques are more than welcome, I would love to know what people think and suggestions on how I might improve. Also feel free to tell me if I've misspelled something, I checked like a million times but you know how it goes.

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Follow-Up (coming when completed)

Credits!

Faife are a closed species that were designed by Kiocah, who has helped me write some stories about the adorable adopts I've gotten from her. If you would like more info on faife or to see more of Kiocah's artwork, she can be found on Furaffinity and on DeviantArt

This cover I actually made myself, so credit for that thing goes to me.

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