God, this was a nightmare to complete! Never. Doing. Coloured. Lines. With. This. Many. Characters. Again. Ever!
It looks okay, I think. Out of all of the outfits, Willa's is the worst. Asuna has so many details on her outfit so I just simplified it for Willa but it looks so basic and dull TT-TT
The others look pretty alright though. Pablo and Sephi look really good in their outfits and they really suit the characters I chose for them to cosplay as. Misteria looks alright, Jacob just looks fabulous and Byron......... looks like he'd be cold in that outfit XD. Byron would have been in Haruka's hoodie, but I was unable to find a reference for it.

Pablo - Death the Kid from Soul Eater
Sephi - Elizabeth from Kuroshitsuji
Misteria - Akeno from High School DxD
Byron - Haruka from Free!
Willa - Asuna from Sword Art Online
Jacob - Ryuk from Death Note