Two of two pin up prepose commissions for silverleaf455

(pleasetell me if anything needs to be edited i was gonna draw the nipples but i wassnt sure whaat color to make them since reference didnt show any.)

I am currently trying to earn money to go see my mate. I am treated like trash here and every day cry wanting to be in his arms for once. But we live so far apart. Im in texas hes in fricken canada ;n; please help me get to him even i just for a sort visit? please?