Chapter 5 - It Certainly is Good Rope by Volt Siano

Chapter 5 - It Certainly is Good Rope

Volt Siano

26 August 2017 at 15:29:54 MDT

The night was long, and very uncomfortable. But salvation came with the morning. All the same, she does have a few questions about how Jason ended up in such a predicament... So that'll be a bit awkward to explain...


How does that first part sound to you guys? Before the chapter break. I'm fairly certain that the way Jason responds is reasonable, but does it sound natural?


If you wish to leave any critique, feel free to be a bit brutal; I've gone through this multiple times to check for mistakes of any sort, but it's still likely that a few errors could have escaped my notice.

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