"I WANT YOU" by Vandclash (critique requested)

"I WANT YOU" (critique requested)

Vandclash

1 October 2020 at 20:02:35 MDT

"I WANT YOU....

I want you...

I want you...

I really want you. My heart is melting, my feet are tickleing, my hands are shaking.... I feel butterflies all over my body...
I'm trying to keep my eye on you... You have been chosen... Kufinya never misses and you'll be mine!"