24 June 2017 at 14:38:04 MDT
I really like Mae.Go buy the game if you haven't already.
on 24 June 2017 at 14:59:37 MDT
Wow this is really clean. I think you did well on the character as well as the estavlished pose. I do feel like he could be leaning a bit more, or something to create more interest in the pose in general. Though it stands well on its own.
I like your perspective and coloring, though I feel you could have pushed more shadows and hughlights, and perhaps selected a more contrasting color for the background. If only because it would put more emphasis on the character again?
Overall though, love this style, cute, crisp and well rendered.
on 25 June 2017 at 00:08:07 MDT
Thank you so much for critiquing! I really strive for these, to learn from mistakes I can't see or didn't notice at first! I definitely agree with the pose, I feel I was close but still needed to push it. I also wanted to keep it kinda flat colored since this is the first time I've done line-less art.As for the background, totally agree. I was trying to find the right colors and some didn't work out or just cased too much much attention then the character itself.I stuck with that color because I'm impatient and wanted to release more artwork.
Thank you again for the critique and the compliments! I really appreciate it! <3
on 25 June 2017 at 00:21:31 MDT
Apologies for the bad spelling in it! Was typing it on my phone at work! Either way I did feel you did good for the piece! But those were the little things I noticed.
I'm a huge color nut, so that stood out to me the most!
on 27 June 2017 at 09:06:46 MDT
Love your take on her :D The colours and shape you used really fit <3