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I did some more work on this. I mainly fixed perspective issues so I can add in more environmental elements, which is my next step. I also did some editing and polishing here and there.
I'm still floundering in the grayscale stage and it has a ways to go. Critique is always appreciated.
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Tiomara
My critique take or leave it.
You have got a wonderful grasp of pose, anatomy, and coloring! There are very few tidbits that I could point out that would help but either way here we go!
1) The fore characters left arm is...off. The bicep is the right length, but the forearm and hand are out of proportion, the muscle too large, and not enough overlap and bend to help with the view. The hand also seems flat and needs to round out over the thigh to help. Pull elbow back and up some to help with that. The right arm is also too long, to have that pose the bicep would have to be abnormally long, which is why it looks slightly off.
2)The lighting seems to be coming from everywhere, which is why the picture looks flat. I've always found that when I've got a background color set, I'll add in a layer of reference, to show where my lighting is coming from to help keep the overall lighting fluid.
3)The thighs on the fore character look too small, and because of the pose a bit like the hips are going a different direction.
Other than that keep up the good work!