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Wildfire!! by TeamCapumon (critique requested)

Wildfire!! (critique requested)

TeamCapumon

It's above one hundred fahrenheit
I can't tell if it's day or if it's night
It's burning unbelievably bright
I'm blinded by these flashing lights

My lungs are failing from inhaling
all the charcoal from this circle
of the hate and the lies

God, how dare you
It's unfair you
deny, ignite and
close your eyes
You think by now
That I would have learned
Not to play with fire
if I don't wanna get burned

But I'm a pyromaniac
And your veins are full of gas
you're burning higher, higher
I'm storming this wildfire

I am immune (WILDFIRE!)
Because of you (WILDFIRE!)
I'm fire proof (WILDFIRE!)
Because of you (WILDFIRE!)

Wildfire!! - Circrush

This looked better in my head, but ah, doesn't everything

I was playing with colors while shading and idk if I like it?? But it's a thing that happened. Also I did a poll asking about what kind/density of shading looked the best to other people but I completely ignored the results and went with an even less shaded version than the "least shaded" option on the poll LOL

This character's Ultivirili - Sarah's "super" form. However, this is the Soldier Ultivirili - not Sarah herself. They're separate entities.

If you're unfamiliar with Sarah, she's from my story, Oneiromon: Explorers of the Past!

Time taken: A little under 3 hours, I guess I am a faster artist than I thought lol

Character is C me

Please critique this piece, even if you only have one or two small things to say! I'll love you forever if you do //sHOT

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