Incident on Pumpkin Hill by Teacat (critique requested)

Incident on Pumpkin Hill (critique requested)

Teacat

28 January 2014 at 18:29:46 MST

An unfortunate happening indeed!

Featuring a couple of grebij's scamps.

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    Dude, this is a really fun piece! Can't believe no one's commented yet.

    Anyway, I'm awful at critiques, FYI ... In this case, the only thing I can even think to say is that maybe the shading doesn't seem drastic enough? I'm thinking stronger contrasting shadows would've better conveyed the moonlit night, I dunno. Also, maybe it's just me, but it took me a while to realize what was on the wheel of the cart. I see the tiny fragment of pumpkin there, but adding more chunks of destroyed pumpkin might've been clearer. Again, maybe that's just me. X3

    Otherwise, the characters look fantastic, I reeeally love your use of color here, and I totally dig the pixel effect you used. Looks great!

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      Oh hey thanks for the response! Your critiques are thorough and detailed, and I appreciate the constructive notes. <3

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    a classic. fond memories from when it was first posted.