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James and Mineva recline on the couch of their home. Mineva is about 8 1/2 months along with fraternal twins, and the sibling rivalry has already begun. Her belly is a battleground as the boy and girl jostle for the little space in her womb. It's cute to think about, but it plays hell on her bladder. The two are very excited, and are just counting the days until they see their little boy and little girl for the first time.
Mature for nudity.
Mineva copyright mineva on FA
James and artwork copyright myself.
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tbh, I don't consider the testicles being visible any more explicit then what I went for. Sure, they're visible, but it's no worse then it would be if the characters were feral dragons. On top of that, he doesn't have an erection, the whole thing is in a sheath, so I don't really see a problem there. As for the breasts, I tried finding some pictures online, but almost all of them had the breasts rounded like these a re depicted. I know they get heavier as they fill with milk, but I also know that each woman is different, and sometimes the breasts are a bit more perked up while on others they sag. Don't ask me to explain it, but that's just what I've been able to observe.
Also, I don't normally outline the areolas, I only did it in this case because it's just a line art sketch. If I were to color it, the outlines would be removed.
As for the wings, the ref sheet of the female shows she has a different wing structure then the males. Normally, I draw my Dragons with the wings being like hands, but the female is an exception to the rule as she is not my character (the male is however), so I stuck with the ref sheet http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9934225/.
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The testes rule isn't mine, it's Weasyl's. I think it's annoying, too, but the official ruling on what classifies as "moderate" is May not include genitalia or areola. You can see the full rating guide here. I think that any furred genitalia is just straight-up general, but that's not what the rules dictate.
Understandable, but what I was saying was I couldn't even tell she had any.
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Unfortunately, because there are testes, it has to be explicit.
The female's visible arm lacks definition in the correct areas, as well as an elbow. But the male's right is rather good; I wonder how you missed it? Areolas are dark areas, they're not really outlined unless you've had a breast augmentation of some sort. The bottom of the nipple does not need to be outlined. They're more pyramid-shaped and less so much like a cylinder. The male's fingers on his left hand sound be much longer. Her right hand seems a bit small. As a female becomes pregnant, her breasts fill with milk, so they get heavier at the bottom and more sack-like, with less of a spherical look. The female's tail sticks out awkwardly and unnaturally; try relaxing it. The female's toes look awkward because of how they all curve out. If the female has wings, they're unclear.
Males testes are never art the same level; one will always be slightly higher than the other. I don't know what you're basing the anatomy of his penis off of, so I'm not sure what that line on the glans is.
The fingers of your wings are too fat. Here is a good wing tutoral.
You have an over-all good feel of soft forms; this is illustrated in how you have the different body parts give for one another, as well as the couch to the body. You've only got some minor anatomy issues, which you probably missed during the sketch. Try stepping away from the safety net of the outline and try for some lineless work. Show your edges with value instead of hard line.