The vapor came suddenly, surrounding them and pooling about their feet. It feels like fog, but it looks like smoke, he thought. All was silent, but for the beating of three hearts.
"I don't like it," said Blayce. This place was not here before.
"I think this is where they rest," replied Mercury.
Because I have not posted anything in a while! One of my stories I have not written in since Dec. 2012 finally visited~
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Pantherra
Pretty! I love how you really managed to pull the attention to the characters and left not much detail of the landscape = making it more mysterious