13 September 2017 at 09:04:33 MDT
The City Silent Page 8. Slowly coming along. There are some cameos of old characters in here, friends of mine.
on 13 September 2017 at 19:17:51 MDT
Wow, this is a really cool composition! :)
on 13 September 2017 at 20:30:51 MDT
Thank you very much! Struggled with this one a bit.
on 15 September 2017 at 00:33:47 MDT
A video like still. Life in motion at a coffee gathering spot; hurried baristas in a multi framed blur, opening door, a dog easing towards the restroom, patrons grouped around their tables, not really paying attention to the standup poet trying to hone his craft, or more likely, get by another long evening.
on 15 September 2017 at 07:35:08 MDT
Thanks for taking such a long look and for letting me know what you saw. That's really rare and helps me out. Very kind of you! You allowed me to see one major thing that's not working so I can go back and fix it.