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:-C, this is so wrong, poor Freddy Fazbear's Pizza, cuz it's gonna shut down soon! What can Freddy and the others DO?!
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:-C, this is so wrong, poor Freddy Fazbear's Pizza, cuz it's gonna shut down soon! What can Freddy and the others DO?!
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Looks pretty good, specially freddy's face on the bottom page. Was this comic done with your new tablet?
The only thing I would suggest is to be careful with the grammar. It doesn't exactly bother me, but sometimes people can get "angry" because of that.
English is not my native language so sometimes I commit some mistakes too. On the second panel, "meet" should be "met", since it is in the past. Also "maked" should be "made". "Made the animatronics no longer can wander in the day time" can sound a little strange. I think "Made impossible for the animatronics to wander in the day time" sounds better.
Every time I have to write a text in English I double check it, word by word, using this site: http://en.bab.la/
Just click on "English" on the top corner and choose your native language.
Anyway, is good to see that you like Five Nights at Freddy's. I am looking forward for part 2!