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Gaze by StormWhiskers (critique requested)

Gaze (critique requested)

StormWhiskers

I'm trying to make the animals I draw look like they're in the same style as my humans.

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134
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4
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Visual / Digital

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    Well, I'm not the best at IDing style, but I think there are certainly some key similarities between this piece and the human works you've submitted. You've still got the weight-variation in the outline and color consistently highlighting outside of that, but the addition of the fur gives this an almost sketchy quality compared to the smooth lines you've used before. The crosshatching on the nose and lips seem slightly outside what you usually do, but I did see some similar but simpler hatching on your Nightwing piece, so this may only seem inconsistent since you currently don't have many pieces uploaded. For the fur, you might try experimenting with the kind of marks you were using on Nightwing's suit, since those had a sort of fur-like shape to the edges and may help bring more consistency over the simpler marks you you've here.

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      Thank you so much! It's great to get someone else's opinion, I was worried about the sketchy fur but when I tried to make it smooth it didn't really 'look right' maybe I'll try making my humans a little bit sketchier too. I'll definitely try doing the shading similarly to the Nightwing piece, I'm sure it will work well with fur. :)
      Thanks again for taking the time to critique this, I really appreciate it.

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    I like it, its sketchy and its clean at the same time!!! D:
    I can never get such nice line art on the computer, but this is very nicely done