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Castle Renovation by GatorBuns (critique requested)

Castle Renovation (critique requested)

GatorBuns

Toffee hummed a soft tune as he walked along the castle corridor, looking over his newly acquired home. "My my.. Ludo you were such a slob. This place is in utter disrepair." he said, feeling up every crack and hole that lined the corridor walls.. Till he found a room titled 'LUDO ONLY'. The lizard rolled his eyes in response and opened the door.

Inside were boxes and chests stacked as high as they can be, a disgraceful horde of things that Ludo 'threw out' before upon request. Toffee just gave a wry chuckle at this, looking about. "Oh Ludo.. you never were one to let things go." he said, stepping over a few boxes before he noticed a rather peculiar chest atop a few unbalanced boxes, had 'COOL POTIONS FOR LUDO' scratched onto the front. "Cool? I do wonder.." he said, walking towards the stack before his shoe stepped into something with a loud SQUISH!

Before he could realize he stepped in a moldy pile of what could be assumed was once food, Toffee lost his balance before yelling a bit, slipping onto the floor as his feet kicked the large tower before him! One topple turned into many as he was nearly crushed and buried under boxes and bags. "Darnit... If that little..." he muttered, pushing a box out of his face before... splash! He felt a strange mixture go over his face and into his mouth as he gagged and coughed, shoving and flailing before sitting up. He groaned lightly, rubbing it out of his face with a discarded robe before sniffing..

"What was th-." he stopped, noticing what was once above him was the chest box, full of broken glass and some rainbow mixture of its magical content... which had flown its way down his throat only moments before. He huffed and breathed softly.. "Could just be some sort of defu-..." he went wide-eyed, belching a bit before he felt his stomach groan and churn. "Well, a prank box.. gas.. bhurp.. potions Ludo?" he said, stepping up and brushing himself off before stepping back out.. Only to feel his stomach groan more as he felt it.. growing?

Toffee looked down, only to see his own stomach that had pushed out of his dress shirt and jacket to embarrassingly show between stretched out buttons.. "Oh how.." he couldnt finish his thought, before he felt another lewd belch escape his mouth as his rear end began to push on the seat of his pants. It finally dawned on him that he was growing, all over! Feet barely fit his shoes, tail dragged along the floor, cheeks swollen as even his hands were pudgier. He didn't waste time trying to make his way back to his own room, hoping he could find some way to reverse it, belching and hiccuping along before he grew slower and slower...

All at once, shirt buttons popped out and shot along the hallway as the lizards soft and plentiful pudgy paunch fell out of its fabric prison, causing him to slow even more before realizing his tail wasn't the only thing dragging behind. Toffees belches and burps had drained out his pants ripping a few minutes ago, his rump now giant and sagging along as he realized behind him along the carpet was his lower body's clothing.. even shoes ripped wide open as he was nude from the waist... "BHWAAAAARpp!!! Oh my-" Riiiiiiiipp!!, and the rest of his outfit followed! He was nude all over, clothing strewn all over as he had nothing but his stretching hide left to cover his... ahem.. unmentionables.

Toffee finally made it to the large dining hall, barely fitting through the door as he looked around.. "Pleasant.. those.. BHururpp.. buffoon henchmen are still out 'training'... Then I can fix thiOWAAARPP!!" he blushed, his body bloating out more as his pitiful waddle became an incredibly pathetic wobble, as he made it to the middle of the room before his legs were now pushing both against his gargantuan gut, while pulling his bloated behind. He huffed, his normally fit and toned body replaced with a metric ton of flab, adipose and scales as he panted. Toffees face was red with straining, as he stopped for a second... his stomach wasn't gurgling as he wasn't belching...

"I.. must rest. I need energy." he said, going to sit back as he barely moved. His giant rear end didn't allow him to go back at all, as he sloshed and gurgled all over. His fat was more of a thicker jello than a hard flab, as he wobbled and sloshed with each motion. "Ludo, if I didn't kick you out..." he said, going red as he realized his chin would push against a huge fat neck... He rubbed it to the best of his abilities, groaning as his arms were barely able to be lifted up... "Alright.. You cannot stay this.. disgusting form Toffee.. Now.." he went to stand up, pulling with all his might as his stomach was wobbling and sloshing... and then a loud Grooooooooooooorlpppppppp escaped...

"Oh for the lOAAAAAAAAAAAAAARP!!! Not moOwAAAAAAAAAAAAAARUUPPPPRre disgusting expHHHHHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUURRPulsions!!" he belched and burped, uncontrollably as he wasn't growing.. but he wasn't stopping his gaseous musical number. For at least a good ten minutes, belches and hiccups filled the empty castle, a very strained and angry lizard finally calming them down.. "Good... they're finally.. Bhurp... now.. done." he said, going to move before he suddenly began to swell at an alarming weight!! His fat increased at a rate that should be lethal, but his body swelled and skin only grew with the bloating mass as Toffee began to fill the room!!

And as he filled it, soon he would outgrow it, the fat somehow crushing the walls and pushng them all apart as he began to bloat and swell! Toffee's giant form would overtake the castle, filling the hallways as he was pushed back into his fattening neck with anger... "I swear... If I find Ludo..." he groaned, castle bulging with fat.....

BOOOOOOOOOOMPHH!!!!! Soon, only the castle towers and foundation remained!! His body sloshed outwards and pushed on each tower, tilting them slightly as he would wobble and slosh from his fat cheeks to his... OTHER, fat cheeks! The lizard was no longer that, his simple, toned and refined body now replaced by a lake of thick, jell-o like adipose as he couldn't stop his sloshing and wiggling..

"I'll squash him..."

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