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Carol Loves Her Apartment by sonderjen (critique requested)

Carol Loves Her Apartment (critique requested)

sonderjen

All 600 square feet of it.

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318
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6
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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    Love the painterly style you're running with! On the critique requested front, I'd say that the perspective here needs some work. Everything is internally consistent — the sink and counter mesh well, as do the door and ceiling — but the counter and the room in the background seem to be in two separate perspectives.

    Unless she hates the apartment because it's in some Escher-esque interdimensional realm, in which case keep on keepin' on

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      I made a decision early on to mess with the perspective on purpose, but I don't think I did it enough to make it look intentional. Probably should have been warped a bit too :\

      But thanks for the critique! I haven't gotten too many that I've flagged :)

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    I had an apartment like that.

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      It gets worse. The bathroom is entirely pepto bismol pink.

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    I had a good giggle at the title-subtitle dealio. Hey, at least the water pressure seems decent.

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      That is a plus I hadn't considered!