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Untitled chapter/part 1 by Siris (critique requested)

Untitled chapter/part 1 (critique requested)

Siris

Guess it's about time I listed something here. So here is the start of a scifi i've had bouncing around my head for about two years. Started a second chapter but not sure how far i'll go with it. would love some feed back beyond my spelling. and speaking of the spelling sorry i'm stuck using a bluetooth keyboard and tablet right now till my pc is fixed so the spell check is less than what is desired when you combine it with the fact most of this was writen at four in the morning. anyways enjoy and let me know what you think.

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