So I finally figured out how to work my Sai's functions and such with the help of my friends and (it was actually pretty darn easy...I just...need to pay attention more. xD;;)

I went and checked out some tutorials on youtube, did a few practice sketches and this is what I've come up with so far. I think it's a huuuuge improvement over my other work.

It's still a WIP so I still need to add more colors and shading, but so far so good.