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Dangerous Business Ch. 1 by Shad_Tormond (critique requested)

Dangerous Business Ch. 1 (critique requested)

Shad_Tormond

Mal Treymond is the best thief in Medrain. Business is good until he receives a mysterious offer....

First chapter in the story I've been working on. No TF sequence, but hopefully still exciting to read. Felt like it was time to share this with the world, but it's still very much a work in progress. If there's anything that could be changed or altered, doesn't fit with later chapters, let me know. I can fix it in a re-upload.

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