Enjoying Lunch by se05239 (critique requested)

Enjoying Lunch (critique requested)

se05239

29 September 2019 at 03:40:56 MDT

An Aranya enjoying some edibles. A project long overdue, decided to just go for flats and leave it at that. Better that than never completing it at all.

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132
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3
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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    I like this design! I find it difficult to draw multi-limbed characters--like what to do with the arms when they're doing something. But I like how you have each arm doing something distinct without being messy. The perspective is good as well! that's a difficult thing to do, especially with a unique character fitting in with the environment.

    As far as critique? I'd say add some variation to the line width. With the lines being the same thickness throughout the picture, the subject and environment blend in somewhat. Other than that, I say this is a great picture!

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      Initially, I'd only planned to have lineart for the character only to make them pop out but due to things dragging on, linearting the background was the quicker option.
      Thanks for the feedback!

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        Ahh, that's understandable. It's always frustrating when a picture ends up taking longer than expected.