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Evolution Ch. 1 by Scottieboy2020 (critique requested)

Evolution Ch. 1 (critique requested)

Scottieboy2020

HAHAHAHAHA YES I FINALLY GOT AROUND GOOGLE DOCS sorry all caps lol! I'm so EXCITED i finally get to do what i am good at, write a book so others can read it! this book was written partially at night, so it goes along with the self given title of Night-Writer... I may have gotten lazy with the main character, he is me, and i am no longer a chicken caretaker. the job sucked. please enjoy, slap that favorite button if you do, and if you guys want to make your own version of the book, go right ahead. pardon the band references, i like both of those people, just not stuck together like Jesse does. ENJOY!!!

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    I'M SORRY, i made a major cliffhanger there... I am so sorry people i will try not to in the future.

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    And to anyone who sees this: Existence is pain. I can't believe I actually used to write like this... but it's nice to see it once in a while, to show just how much my style's changed/matured.