In a nutshell, Finn's day starts badly

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Transcript:
Whirl: Is there anything else?
Finn: I- I-
Whirl: Is there anything else.
Finn: N-No?
Whirl: Then you can leave.

Characters:
Finn (♂) : Axaqueue (blue) with an orange hat and a red bow
Whirl (♀) : Axaqueue (blue) with the staff and cape

Lore:
Axaqueues: blue creatures, control water
Arbrools: red creatures, control fire
Etrikits: yellow creatures, control electricity
Stodocs: purple creatures, are very strong
Norooits: green creatures, control wind
Zelonams: Lucas's original species
Ripple: Finn's village
Atlas: the city they're in