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[REQ] Nat's Picnic by scaper12123

[REQ] Nat's Picnic

Written by scaper12123 on FA
Request for Flitchard on FA


Out in the forest, a Munchlax and a Noibat were looking for some food. Not just any ordinary Munchlax and Noibat though: it was Remy the Munchlax and his childish but powerful friend Natalie (or Nat as she preferred to go by). They were out looking for fresh berries in particular, as their appetites for fresh fruit could not be sated.

The Noibat was a few sizes bigger than Remy, even though their species were normally the same size. Nat was a drastically powerful sizeshifter, likely due to her draconic heritage. Unfortunately, she was also a child so she had childish ways of using her power. "You don't have to be bigger than me to find berries, you know." Remy said to Nat in a passing comment.

All Remy got in reply was a shake of the Noibat's head. "Dat's really funny, Remy." Nat said in reply, her childish voice slurring her words into things like "Wemy" and "weawwy." "But I'm like a growing goddess! Dere's no reason why I shouldn't be a giant!"

"We're just having a picnic in the forest." Remy remarked. "We're not going to eat the entire place like we're harvesting broccoli. Do you want to eat your Broccoli?"

The child stuck out her tongue and scrunched her face. "Bleh! No thanks!"

"That's what I thought." Remy said. The two of them traveled through the forest in relative silence from that point on. Remy frequently paused to gather up berries for their meal as they ran by bushes. They only found common berries like Orans and Pechas for the most part, but at one point they found a Sitrus berry bush with five berries hanging off its branches. "These will be delicious!" Remy exclaimed, stripping the bush.

"Yeah, dose'll be delisch!" Nat exclaimed. They kept exploring until they had a satisfyingly large amount of berries (a huge arm full for the both of them). Then they picked out a spot and set all their berries in a pile. There was little need to sort them, except for the Sitrus berries.

"How many do you want?" Remy asked, hoping to divide the pile. If Nat insisted on being big then she would probably need more than him.

But then Nat giggled and grabbed the entire pile. "I want dis many!" She gleefully exclaimed.

"But that leaves none for me!" Remy complained, rubbing his growling stomach. Seeing all that food made him famished. It didn't help that he was a Munchlax with a literally insatiable appetite. "I need to eat too, you know."

"Well, too bad! All of dis food is for ME!" Nat replied.

Remy scowled. "Well aren't you a selfish little..." He was about to curse before remembering that Nat was a child, and that wouldn't be very good of him. "I want some of this food! We both gathered these berries."

Nat dropped the berries and stomped her foot. The Noibat had a growing spurt, doubling her height so she was triple Remy's size. "No! I'm hungry and I want these berries! I want 'em I want 'em I want 'em!!!" Nat pouted, stomping the ground over and over. The shaking caused by Nat's incessant tantrum made Remy trip and faceplant into the ground.

"C-calm down, Nat!" Remy exclaimed, growing nervous. Generally Nat's tantrums ended with her stomping over whole countries, which was what Remy wasn't looking for in his day out with the 'little' bat.

Nat huffed and crossed her arms, giving Remy a raspberry and turning her head. "No! I don't want to calm down! I want all my berries!"

Remy huffed right back. He shook his fist at Nat and yelled. "Well then if you want more then get some for yourself!" He demanded.

Nat fumed and stomped the ground some more, undergoing more growing spurts. Now she stood at ten times Remy's height; the Noibat was very imposing at this size. She could easily trap Remy underneath her gigantic feet. But, to Remy's surprise, she sighed and said "Fine! i'll go look for some more berries!" Before Remy could relax though, she added "Don't you eat those rare berries! I want them!" Then the Noibat turned and stomped through the forest.

Remy sighed in relief and started eating. The pile of berries quickly disappeared as he shoved it down his maw. His belly looked hardly different after eating so many berries. Remy went through about half the pile before he decided to go ahead and eat the whole thing, if only to punish Nat for being so selfish.

That was a mistake. When the Noibat returned, carrying literal bushes of berries, she huffed and stomped the ground. "I thought I told you not to eat the rare berries!" She yelled at Remy.

"You were going off to find more berries for yourself." Remy said. "You have ten times the number of berries we found in your arms right now. Plus some of the bushes. What's that little pile to you?"

Nat dropped all the berries on the ground and picked up Remy. "I don't know about that, but I see a naughty little Oran berry who's just begging to be eaten."

"You do that, and I'll..." Remy tried to think of some threat to throw at the Noibat. "I'll make it so you're starving for the whole day!"

Nat laughed and lifted Remy above her head, opening her mouth wide. "I doubt that. You'll be very filling, little pudgy Munchie!" She teased before dropping him and letting him fall down her throat. Nat swallowed him and giggled. "Silly little Munchie, thinking he could threaten ME! Now, for the rest of these berries."

Nat sat down and started picking out the berries from the leaves. She tossed berries into her mouth in big handfuls. When she was at the bottom of her pile, she sighed. She still felt rather hungry. The Noibat got up and looked around. "Dis forest is so big." She groaned before tripling her size. She started walking around and picking up anything she interpreted as food - bushes of berries and Pokemon alike. She shoved everything she grabbed down her throat until she cleared the forest of everything edible.

But still she wasn't satisfied. "Uuuugh... so hungry!" Nat moaned, feeling as if she hadn't eaten anything at all. "I gotta find something to eat..." She looked around and saw a few places that could have been good. There was a snowcapped mountain in one direction. Nat licked her lips and walked over to it. She gathered up all of the snow on the mountain and shoveled it into her mouth like a snow cone. It tasted fluffy and delicious but it did nothing to satisfy her hunger. Then she spotted a bunch of Pokemon who had been living in the snow and ate them all too.

"Uuuuugh... why am I so hungryyyyy?" Nat complained, moving on to devour more things. She decided to uproot the whole forest and shove it down her mouth. It tasted bitter but it was food. Still not satisfying enough. She started eating more and more things, turning to populated lands and devouring their people and Pokemon. Not enough! "SOOOO HUNGRYYYY!!!" Nat kept moaning as she ate and ate and ate. She grew herself more and more all the while to make finding meals easier. Pretty soon she was stripping the whole world of plants and animals. She started to turn to eating the world itself, but it never satisfied her.

All those rocks were so bland and almost a bit disgusting but she was out of options. She hated them so much though. Nat groaned and grew herself until the whole planet was nothing more than a big blue apple to her, then she put the whole thing in her mouth and swallowed. Finally, she felt her belly fill!

"Ooooh, finally. Dat's much better." She said, rubbing her belly whilst floating in space. But, to her surprise, her belly felt like it quickly became empty. She couldn't have digested the planet that quickly. Then a thought occurred to her. "Remy! What did you do to me?" She demanded, pounding her tummy with a fist. She started coughing and gagging to try and get the Munchlax out.

Lo and behold, she actually succeeded. Remy flew out of her tummy and into space. "Hi Nat!" He said. "Feeling hungry?" He had to suppress giggles, meaning he clearly had something to do with Nat's hunger.

"Wat did you do to me?" Nat demanded to know.

"Oh, well I was feeling really hungry. And lucky for me there was a lot of food falling into that dark cave I was in." Remy replied.

"You ate the food I was eating? Dat's disgusting!"

With a shrug, Remy replied "I'm a Munchlax. I don't keep high standards."

Nat huffed. "Well now what am I supposed to eat? You ate the whole planet! There's nothing left for me to eat!"

Remy laughed. "That's what you get for being so selfish with all those berries. You need to learn to share, little girl!" The Noibat went into another tantrum, which brought Remy to laugh again. "But there's all these tiny little planets laying around. They're worth about as much as berries."

"But dey taste disgusting!" Nat remarked. "I don't want to eat planets!" Remy smirked at her, knowing she had no other choice at this point. Sighing in defeat, Nat reached over to grab the moon and then tossed it into her mouth. It wasn't much, but at least it was edible…

[REQ] Nat's Picnic

scaper12123

Remington and Natalie go on a picnic in the forest. Unfortunately, Nat the Noibat is a little child who isn't good at sharing. She also can grow bigger. MUCH bigger. Things go downhill pretty fast for Remy.


About a month ago, I offered requests to anybody who wanted them. Well, I've finally had time to oblige this holiday season. I've been working on getting myself more pumped up for writing and I'd say it succeeded. What you see is the general format that requests will take: A very short story, underneath 2000 words in length, and with minimal editing. Can really be fired off in an hour (which makes you wonder why it took a month. Fuck my professors this year, seriously)


If you like what you see here, be sure to consider commissioning me when I open commissions up next year.


Request made by flitchard for a story involving his character, Natalie
Remington belongs to me, scaper12123

Originally posted on 2015-12-28.

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