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Toriel found the Laser Gunman! by Sapphire Crook (critique requested)

Toriel found the Laser Gunman! (critique requested)

Sapphire Crook

"Come out, my child, I just want to talk over some cake."
"NUHUH, wasn't me, lol."
~ Dat Yeen Babu, 2k15

THE VIDEO:
https://youtu.be/uEvGT_d7XVk

What, you thought she was shot by a jerk? Nope, just a sneaky yeen thinking it can mess with momma goat!

The Fine:

  • Generally, I'm content. The image works and carries its intended power, and it shows a good bit of effort on mixing a few elements and interactions.
  • Good job, A for effort.

The Filthy:

  • Ugh, the hands are a bit too messy and the arms weird. It still works?
  • The shading on that yeen.

Submission Information

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