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What a spunky little lizard. by Sapphire Crook (critique requested)

What a spunky little lizard. (critique requested)

Sapphire Crook

I AM OPEN TO REQUESTS!

Whatever species he is, he's got some of everyone!
High res version is incoming.

After seeing http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17397248/
I got inspired to try and do something punky! The result isn't half bad.

FIX IT:

  • The shading is still off. While better, the shirt and neck have too strong highlights. The 'smeared' style works, but needs significantly more fading and solidity. Experiment with brushes!
  • The line art, while workable, still isn't great.
  • Shirt stitchings look weird
  • His right face half is just... buuulging.
  • Should've added that yellow part most reptiles have. THat 'belly chest' colouration!
  • His cheeks need something to fix it up and make it feel more alive.
  • You forgot the horns. And to highlight the tongue!

Shoulder patting:

  • The shirt design isn't half bad! Good use of brushes and pressures. That'll come in handy when shading rubbers.
  • His anatomy is quite workable, considering you usually mess up the head/body sizes.
  • His collar looks... there!

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