I figured it was about time that I updated the art on Daemyn's character sheet (https://www.weasyl.com/submission/253272/daemyn-for-the-group-chevalin-wanderlust) for Chevalin. The old art is pretty stale in more ways than one. His expression is just... what? That's not Dae at all XD I also see a huge improvement in how I draw horses, so I wanted to reflect that as well^^ In my opinion he also needed to look heavier and stronger. That all said and done I'm still not sure if I should go ahead and start lining this sketch just yet, and therefor I turn to you, my friends, who have been drawing horses for so much longer, for feedback :D

I dunno if a horse has ever been seen in this exact pose, but he looks so cute I ain't gunna change it x3 So! Is his head too big? Should I shrink it down a little? And the lifted fore leg, doe the upper, idk 'arm'?, seem a little too short?

ANYWAY! Feedback wanted SO BADLY! Plz halp x3