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The Battle of Drakar: Prologue - The Enemy by Sabata McCloud (critique requested)

The Battle of Drakar: Prologue - The Enemy (critique requested)

Sabata McCloud

Prologue for the first part of The Semset Schism, a sci-fi series detailing the violent rebellion against Emperor Heinrik Rin-Landek IV.

Mostly establishing some characters and determining (surprise!) the enemy for this particular conflict, as well as give some insight as to how the whole mess started.

Critique please, I've been out of the creative writing game for a while and I'm pretty rusty.

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