This is actually really good the anatomy is well done the fabric looks good with exception of the blanket and pillow. the only thing I can really point out is that the light would only really affect the character and lightly around the computer you wouldn't see it in the air unless it is especially dusty. Unless you were trying to put the light on the wall but that still wouldn't work because it would show up further away from the computer because the screen isn't facing the wall where you see the light. Other than that it looks good the colours are nice the lines are consistent and it has a really good composition.
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This is actually really good the anatomy is well done the fabric looks good with exception of the blanket and pillow. the only thing I can really point out is that the light would only really affect the character and lightly around the computer you wouldn't see it in the air unless it is especially dusty. Unless you were trying to put the light on the wall but that still wouldn't work because it would show up further away from the computer because the screen isn't facing the wall where you see the light. Other than that it looks good the colours are nice the lines are consistent and it has a really good composition.