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Jeremiah Carnegie by Rude Boy Too Rude (critique requested)

Jeremiah Carnegie (critique requested)

Rude Boy Too Rude

Meet Jeremiah Carnegie. A 31 year old I.T. company manager, athlete, and medieval warfare enthusiast. He's proper, eloquent, chivalrous, polite, and generally friendly but absolutely HATES being emasculated by his counterparts(specifically comments about unicorns being "girly") and has no issue with engaging in physical confrontations in these scenarios. He's got a strict rule against hitting women, though, which somewhat ties in with his divorce of a couple years ago. He'd been married for 5 years before they split up due to her violent verbal and often physical fits of rage. In his free time he works out, goes to the local pub with his group of friends, and Historical European Martial Arts(Yes, that's a thing). The scar on his right brow was a result of an accident that occurred when he was still learning swordplay. He's managed to reach a considerable amount of skill with a longsword and is currently learning to wield a greatsword in his own time. He plans to buy his own at some point.

Other stuff:

  • He's unaware of the fact that he's practically got a fan club between some of the workers at his job

  • He's often told his speech pattern is strange

  • Throughout his adulthood he's been in 9 fights having something to do with an emasculating comment; he lost 1 because he was drunk at the time

  • He almost always wears button-ups; he tends to have trouble with normal shirts.

  • He's tried smoking but finds it absolutely vile

  • He absolutely despises beans

  • His favorite color is lavender

  • Despite being somewhat unhappily single, he doesn't put too much effort forth to dating.

  • He's self-conscious about his "size"(He's not small. But that can be a problem.)

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