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A Stray, Page 02 by Rito (critique requested)

A Stray, Page 02 (critique requested)

Rito

This was an experiment in making a comic page. It's part of Rito's story, which is still very much in progress. I thought this page stood out, and so I thought I'd post it. Tried to go for a funky effect with the bottom two panels, Rito still on the ground, horizontal, but showing it as vertical to mirror the voice in his head. I'm not sure how effective it was.

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