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Play Time by Rin-kun (critique requested)

Play Time

"Rin,What are you doing?" Mother asks me. I was caught again watching the movies my uncle gave me. "Watching movies...." I said, staring at the screen. The woman in the movie was being stabbed in the neck by her "lover", obvious fake blood running from the wound and onto the man's hand. "Well these movies aren't for you young man!" my mother says and stops the movie. I was upset; it was just getting to the good part! "Now go out and play with your brother and sister instead of being in here all day watching those horrible movies." She told me

I sighed and did as i was told, and went to my older siblings. Rita, my eldest sibling, has long brown hair and bright blue eyes. She was what people called "A Twisted One". And then there's Yukio, the middle child, he was nothing like Rita, with white hair and red eyes. People calls him a "albino". He was petting a black rabbit he must of caught. Rita then yells at me, "Rinto! You missed it! Yukio caught a rabbit!" she said with a twisted expression. Normally that would scare people, but we're different. You see we "Play" with animals, But we're getting bored of them; we want to try something different. "Just let it go, they're boring and we already made twenty-seven toys from them." I tell her. I was tired, i wanted to play with something bigger and harder to kill. Then it came to me, "Human," i said, "What about them?" Rita asks. "Let's play with humans instead of these animals , and we can keep them alive longer since they're harder to kill"" Rita and Yukio likes the idea and agrees, and we know just the perfect person for play time.

"Nick!" I called out as i ran to our neighbor. He was mean to us, but at times like this he'll be nice. A perfect time to trick him. "What is it Rin?" our neighbor asks. "Can you help me and my siblings with our hide out? We need help fixing a few things." he sighs "Sure...." He says as he gets up from the sidewalk. "Lead the way brat, and you better hurry,I have a date in seven hours." Oh that poor little girl...she's going to be set up...

I lead Nick through a forest my siblings was waiting for us at a certain spot. "How much further brat?" I heard Nick growl."Just a little more" I answer, gee this is getting annoying...oh well...it'll be worth it. "I lead him further into the forest until we are at a clearing."Is this it?" Nick asks and i just shake my head. "Then where the hell is it?!" He yells,but then.."Thunk" and Nick was out cold, slightly bleeding from his head, behind him in a tree was my sister laughing. "Shall we begin making the toy?" She says.

We had to drag Nick's sleeping body to our hideout. Once we was there Yukio opens the doors for Rita and me and we dragged him inside, accidently bumping him into a few chairs and other toys we made. but after some struggle we got his to his own room. Once Yukio locks the doors behind him and came to the room and helped Rita and I put Nick on the weird metal table and strapped him up, just like the books that father gave to us said to.

We had to connect Nick to breathing tubes and started putting Anesthetics into him, so he could live much longer so we could have more time to create the toy and maybe even more play time unlike our other toys! Yukio sighs and goes over to a rack and gets us our coats and a mask. Rita however,went after the tools.

Once we had our coats and masks on, and we checked our tools. It was finally time to begin the fun. Yukio, Rita, and I gave each other the same look of enjoyment then i grabbed the stoma, and a scapal,ready to begin. To begin the creation of our new and better toy.

I bought the scapal down to Nick's neck and slowly cut it open. I hated this kid's voice..so why not take it away first? once his throat was open, ignoring the red metallic smelling liquid i searched for his Larynx. after i found it i begin cutting it out. once it was out i quickly replaced the now free area with a stoma.

"Finally, free of that annoying voice.." I mumble before throwing the Larynx somewhere in the hall. I then heard a chuckle from Yukio. those were rare unless he was having a lot of fun, which he was. however, next was Rita's turn where she chose to sever the prefrontal cortex and the frontal lobes. This was her favorite thing to do when making our toys. She then took a ten inch skewer, or as we knew it, an Orbitoclast and place it over Nick's left eye socket, above his eyeball and in an instant begins hammering it in. I watch blood go everywhere and listened as she laughed with pure enjoyment then she moved to the next eye and does the same thing. Yukio however sighed and begins getting impatient. Once Rita was done with her part she steps away and allows Yukio to take her spot.

"His eyes...they're ugly, they need to be removed." He says ponting at Nick's green eyes. Rita agrees and offers to help her older brother but Yukio refuses and gets a pair of tweezers and a bowl setting off to work on getting those eyes out however they was still connected and he took a scaple and quickly disconnects it. Then he begins cutting out the fat and muscles of what was left in the socket. Meanwhile Rita was playing one of the eyeballs. "Ew! Gross!" She says in a mocking tone before squishing the eyeball, letting the juices drip down her hand. "Rita put that down...the anesthetics might be wearing off..." Yukio mumbles as he finishes.

Next was hard one, where most of our bases for our toys die. Maxillectomy. A thing i absolutely hated mostly from the noise that does in when doing the said procedure. Rita went to the corner and got us our bone saws. Yukio and i then begins to cut Nick's upper jaw. God, i hated the done the sound the metal saw made against the bones. What made it worse was that Rita was also cutting some bones, his legs to be exact. then i hear a popping noise telling me the upper jaw was off. sighing in relief i watched yukio cut the nose off.

Rita finishes cutting the legs off and sews it back together to make stubs, just so our toy would never run away. Yukio then begins cutting Nicks hands off, staring with the left one. once again the noise...After a while i hear something fall onto the ground i looks over to Yukio who was now cutting the right hand. Rita and i quickly go to where the left hand was and begin to stretch the skin and sew it near the boney parts. "Looky they look like crabby claws!" Rita says pointing at it before Yukio corrects her. "Crab pincers..."

Finally after hours our toy was done. and Nick...no..it was no longer a human so we can't call it a name. The thing that was once Nick tried to move but couldn't. The thing then made a inhuman sound causing us to laugh. "Well then" I said "Shall we play with our new toy?" I ask Yukio and Rita nods and we begin to play. After a few hours of playing we grew tired and wanted to go home. We took off our masks and coats and hanged them up. We said goodbye to our new toy and left. locking the doors behind us.

Three weeks soon passes since we made our new toy, we were now bored of it and looking for a new one. Hey...someone is reading a story..on that computer...maybe we can "Hello dear reader! Did you like the stoy?" We smile and take a rope out of our bag, "We're bored and tired of our toy" Yukio says, now standing behind you. "Would you like to play with us?" We all ask you. "I promise...we'll have fun.." Rita says before slamming a rock on- like to play with us?" We all ask you. "I promise...we'll have fun.." Rita says before slamming a rock on-

Play Time (critique requested)

Rin-kun

When three siblings gets bored of their toys they decide to make a new one...using something very common, but at the same time, different

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