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You Wench! by ReversedSanity (critique requested)

You Wench! (critique requested)

ReversedSanity

Raum walked as fast as his feet would carry him down the mostly empty hall, trying to evade all contact. He hated people and he hated parties, they made him uncomfortable and out of his zone. He preferred the solitude, well as much of the solitude he could manage with a body guard. Xic, the body guard, swiftly followed him in silence. His rather large muscles rippled underneath him. "What's wrong Raum, too normal for you?!" Venus giggled at him as she easily kept up with him. "Leave me be Venus! I'm not in the mood for your annoying squeaky voice. Raum stopped dead at his door, Venus almost passing him and Xic stopping without any problem. Venus re-situated her dress and crossed her arms over her chest, "You just couldn't hurry fast enough could you?" she smirked. The hall was empty as it was far away from the party. "Just stop, I want to be left alone" he muttered, getting upset by the minute. Xic stiffened, but had no right to step in. Raum turned to step into his room. "Your a loser, just like your father.." Venus spat at him. Raum stopped dead, white knuckle gripping the nob. He spun around and got into Venus' face screaming, "Yeah well your nothing but a slutty wench! Just like your mother!" He spun back around and muttered, "Why couldn't dad marry someone else?!" and then looked at Xic, "I don't want anyone entering!" He slammed the door shut behind him and just as Venus was about to enter Xic stepped into the way. "With all due respect, I believe Prince Raum would like to be alone" he spoke, standing talk and alert at the door. "But Xiccy!" Venus pouted, only to have her mother at the end of the hall calling for her; "Don't worry about Raum, come have fun and meet all the people!"

;w; So Raum has a step sister now, and man is she a snooty brat. But that's how her mama raised her so you can't really blame her. I'm sure a few of you will learn to love her!(:
Anyway, Venus is 16, she is a manx cat, she is 5'11", chubby but small, and has the biggest crush on Xic. And she absolutely loves to pick on Raum.
So expect a lot MORE of these 3(:

Art/Raum/Venus (c) ME
Xic (c) Z

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