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Dragon Rage: The First War (firefly1332's giftstory 1) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (firefly1332's giftstory 1) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Dec 25, 2017

I didn't know when firefly1332's birthday was and I don't think I've ever seen it in my notifications. If it was there, then I must not have been paying attention. Anyway, this whole story was based on an RP that Firefly and I did here on DA through notes. The last part of our RP that didn't get put into this giftstory ended with this, with my post being the last:

The next day, Hannah started convincing her father to offer a job to Bam's master and, after a long talk, she succeeded. That noon her father went to do a professional talk with him. Carlos met up with Hannah's father and said, "Good day, sir. How can I help you?"

But I don't want to leave this gift ending on a cliff-hanger and thought it would be best to end on the night of our character's meeting. I'll move these last posts to a second giftstory if Firefly wants it.

Selena and Hannah (c) firefly1332 from Deviant Art
Aeolus, Bam and Carlos (c) me

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231