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Welcome to my Imaginaerum by Porsche (critique requested)

This woman, this human thing, I have strong emotions for and I know why. She is my creator, my soul and master of all that is me.

But she has made a grave mistake for I am the king of all fantasies and her lust for my presence is overwhelming; she comes to me and awaits my move. I look into her hazel eyes then trace her form down; her fair tanned skin making up her appearance, the palm sized fiery red jewel nested in her cleavage, her luscious rose red dress that would make any man's fantasies soar the horizon, and as my gaze reunite with hers - those sizzling red eyes of hers, she asks me...

Please, Jürgon, I want to experience your world. Will you take me there? I want to be rid of this dull life.

And I said...

I’ll only truly take you there if it is so, what your heart desires.

She looked at me with such lust in her eyes, I couldn’t turn away. She has bewitched me with her mortal seduction and I wasn’t objecting in the least. She took a step closer to me, I noticed. She took another step nearer to my presence, I couldn’t resist. I offered my white gloved hand to her, very gentleman like; this is how the mortals do this after all. She lightly extend her petite hand onto mine and I drew her in, close to my body and hooked her lithe frame snug to mine; gripping her midsection tightly. Her scent, her feel, her looks all so daring... so tempting! And as she looked me in the eyes, I couldn’t bare it any longer, this feeling of raging lust.

She fear me not, despite my beastly being, my red left and white right eyes, the horns that swept into a spiral behind the ears atop my head, the red black and white pelt that covered most of my body under this naval style military dress I wore.

I told her to close her eyes and dream of her happy place. A place only her heart would know, only then would I be at full power. The power of her mind and heart were strong and I resist several urges to violate her vulnerable form while she was in my clutches. I stroked her brunette hair then took her hand as I whispered...

Follow my lead.

And she did with trusting delight, never once did she open her eyes. My power over her was slowly growing and soon it would be too strong... and too late but I have to maintain focus, she is mortal and I am but an entity of the beyond, we were not meant to be. Her heart speaks to me and when it did I knew... I knew what to do. The soft melody of a piano pierced her ears just as I took my leading hand and lead her into a waltz to match. A melody I used to play for her when she was yongue. A melody that I still play for her and one that never ages to me.

The way she moved, the way her dress flew, it was too much to bare! What am I doing?! I am the King of Fantasies! I should not be falling for a mere mortal! ...but

Open your eyes... see the world, you so desire.

I whispered in her ear as we waltzed into a great cosmos. A celestial place where time stood still and the impossible was possible. The initial look across her face was uncertain and I felt a lapse in power from her heart.

Shhh... I’ve got you. Fear this not, for this is where I am from. I would not harm you.

Again I whispered words of sweet to her ears. We waltz away, surprising royalty with such maneuvers I have never seen or experienced, this was great fun. The area around us was open to the voids and anything her mind visioned became a reality through my doing. We swing and glide across the stars on a surface that only a realm such as mine could explain. I was confident of her approval but the power from her heart continued to fade and as such, I became angered by this.

We spun one last time before I released her and faded. I just had to get away from something These feelings... so powerful and not even I, a King, can distort them. I heard her silent eek followed by my name, it echoed through this hallowed nothingness forever and I looked up to see her standing atop a large unmoving cog of planetary size. She looked distressed and as she looked around she began to realize her mistake. This space labyrinth was vast and only the two of us to witness it all, now and forever. The area of which I was standing lifted me to her and I extend my arm to her, calmly and said.

I will return you to your home now... just follow my lead. Trust in your heart if you trust in me.

And she took my hand. We set off to finish this waltz. A time I wished could last forever, tangibly but now my own heart aches within knowing she will be nothing more than a memory. We glide and spin with such fun as her new faith in me strengthens me even further. We passed by a larger ringed planet, passing it by until the bright star behind it shine upon this majestic mortal woman. Then I snapped inside... I couldn’t stop myself but I stopped the both of our motions and stood with her in my arms, looking down into her eyes. She looked at me in a daze and the pure ray of light from the planet’s star made her eyes glimmer and made me uncontrollable inside.

I swept my hands upward of her body slowly, making a carbon copy of her mature being into my mind to remember forever. With both hands I cupped her chiseled jaw then positioned her head up to look at me directly as I moved in for a daring feat; prepared for rejection in the utmost of bitter ways with the cold lifeless feeling of regret to follow behind. We were just inches from sealing a special bond between an immortal king and a mere mortal, just inches! I fantasized about her luscious lips against mine, her breathing on my face and neck, and to think it was all finally going to happen.

But I am sad now... I am sad as I sit in this lonesome void, the exact spot and unmoving; thinking of the mortal woman I... I loved. This feeling can bring even a king of the outworld to their knees and beg for mercy and forgiveness. I’m so alone and the past millennia a new wave of dreamers have come and gone... but none shall compare to my dearest, my sweet Catalina. So I sit in this timeless void; free of age, free of death, free of all but stuck with sweet memories and her lullaby that eases my spirits.

Inspired by Nero

A 2 Steps from Hell composition

Welcome to my Imaginaerum (critique requested)

Porsche

A short story (Limerick?) that literally popped into mind over the course of a 4 minute long composition from the group, 2 Steps from Hell. One of my most favorite groups that composes theatrical pieces and of which motivates me into coming up with what I think are grand scenes.

With that said, this was a spark decision so don't expect flawless writing skill, grammar, or lack of loopholes!

Thought I would just share what my mind sees when a ballad like this plays, especially love the way the woodwinds lay on the power 1 or so mins into the song.

Marked as moderate due to lustful themes.

The inspirational composition responsible for this short story

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