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Colab: Citrus and Citrus by Pinipy (critique requested)

Colab: Citrus and Citrus (critique requested)

Pinipy

I'm just migrating all my art. From oldest to newest.
Art & Citrus Skies © Pinipy
Citrus Orange © Dreamilicious

Dreamie did the lines, I coloured and shaded

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    This is a really interesting picture. The lighting and use of sparkles makes them look somewhat like constellations, and have some sort of effect that makes them seem out of this world. The distinct change in coloring style for their drinks is a little off-putting, and makes them seem more two-dimensional than they could've. The cartoony eyes are cute and stay within MLP's original style, but could use some more pizzaz, as eyes often sparkle more than fur would, yet the eyes are devoid of that intense shine and the body retains it. They're very colorful and contain and interesting mix of realistic shading and cartoony/intense shading, giving them some depth, but not enough that they seem plain or dull. Very nice, but a little tough on the eyes, with the strong colors and lighting. Overall lovely picture.

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      Oh man! Thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to write this. At the time (about 8 months ago when I drew this) eyes weren't my strong point and so I lazily made them boring and dull. The critique you just gave me will definately help me in the future so I thank you very much!

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        You're very welcome! I'm happy I helped. :)