vent in between commissions

The danger is I'm dangerous
And I might just tear you apart
I'm gonna catch ya
I'm gonna get ya get ya
I wanna taste the way that you bleed, oh
You're my kill of the night

was trying to go for a redo of this(????)
www.furaffinity.net/view/9173099/
but now that i look at it i fucking hate it ugh im gonna cry