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Toti by PewterKat (critique requested)

Toti (critique requested)

PewterKat

Finally! Here's reptile request #2 for crimsonriver on FAof his slider-turtle girl, Toti!

Ran into some problems making this one. The last version looks a lot like it had been scratched up. I don't know how that happened, but it seems like I'm going to be having problems with some of the acrylic brushes in Painter as well. I don't know how I'm going to be able to keep painting if this keeps up. When I took it in Photoshop to fix the colors, it looked as though the brushtrokes got overly pixilated and that's what caused the problem. But I got it to where I'm satisfied with it. Unfortunately, when I tried to add in scale detail... it didn't come out well. >_< So I had to scrap that vefore I messed it up again. I couldn't take a second heartbreak on that piece.

Thanks again for lending me your character, crimsonriver! I appreciate you helping me out. This was really good practice.

Character (c) crimsonriver on FA

Art (c) pewterkat

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    When looking at the thumbnail, I thought she was holding a big hot pocket and was in the middle of taking a big bite out of it with strings of cheese coming out of her mouth xD.

    Hmm, if I have to give some criticism, I'd say maybe make the lines thicker. If I hadn't seen the nails I wouldn't have figured out the lump on her shoulder was actually a clenched fist. The shading and lighting is pretty good though, so good job!

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      Thanks! I'll keep the tip in mind too, thanks. I'm really trying to improve on my digital painting. :)