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Fhaburn - Fakemon Idea by ookamij64 (critique requested)

Fhaburn - Fakemon Idea (critique requested)

ookamij64

Fhaburn (Fah - bern)
Fire

Classification: Fox Pokemon

Name origins: fha > loosely from phox/fox; burn > fire

While considered a rare sight in the region, Fhaburn is a delightful Pokemon eager to play. It spouts flames when in immediate danger, but it mostly saves it for roasting wild berries. Fhaburn is fast on its feet and will not hesitate on running away. Hiding is another method of escape it turns to in face of bigger foes. Farmers adore Fhaburn to keep their Miltank company as well as providing warmth in the winter months by lighting up extra hay for fire.


Honestly debated about sharing this but I figured it already got attention outside my usual social circle and the contest I originally done this for is long over, I should be okay. I'm only a casual fan of Pokemon, but I had done some designs for original mons back a few years prior to this. I still don't consider myself top grade Fakemon maker as I know darn well it wouldn't be taken seriously.
I think the other might be up to debate as both tend to get a little more into some touchy subjects and the final evolution has a bit of its name based off of the Hebrew word for fox and taking into consideration over what's been going on in the world, I've been antsy to even try...

Some grammatical errors are present because it was a rushed process of getting the data for the Pokemon compiled. I understand that some changes need to be made, but I rather share the piece in its original writing as I had submitted it into the contest I didn't win in. But I still got my own copy of Pokemon Scarlet regardless.

Flagged for critique so I could see what to improve. First time accepting them so don't get too critical.

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