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Haven by oddeofreq (critique requested)

Forest Haven

Imagine a forest. This trees are all hearty and great for climbing. Where the trees are numerous enough that on the brightest day, the shade is only lit by the scattered dancing beams of light that make their way past the leaves. Enough light shines through so that soft patches of grass can grow all over the ground. There are always animals around, from the birds, squirrels, and deer to the occasional bear or pack of nomadic wolves. All the animals ignore your presence, for you are of no matter to them, unless provoked. In the summertime, it never gets to humid or too hot and when it rains, its never too much or to bad. In the wintertime, it never gets too cold or too windy and when it snows, it snows just enough to keep just a couple feet on the ground and its the perfect snow for a fort or a snowball fight. There is a vast meadow to the northeast a couple of miles away. Nobody knows where this place is. They only know the stories.

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I hope to find this place and make it my home.

Haven (critique requested)

oddeofreq

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