Sign In

Close
Forgot your password? No account yet?

Lil RC Car by oddeofreq (critique requested)

Chronicles of the Lil RC Car

It started when some IT guy was getting in his car to go home at the end of his work day. He was leaving work when he saw someone in the next parking lot was playing with a lil RC car. At first, he was glad he was going in a different direction because he didn’t have to worry about accidentally running over it. But then, he had a crazy idea. Just out of sheer idiocy and humor, he decided to drag race the lil RC car. He drove his car up to the stop sign and gave the kid with the controller a look that spoke "wanna race?". The kid nodded and positioned his lil RC car right up alongside the IT guy's. He revved his engine a couple times. The lil RC car spun its tires. They both saw a leaf slowly falling to the ground. As soon as it touched down, they both punched their throttle as hard as they could. Within seconds the lil RC car was taking off so fast it made the IT guy look like he was stopping. The lil RC car left little tire streaks in the road. The lil RC car took off so far down the road, the only sign of it was the trail of smoke it left behind. The IT guy stopped in amazement and looked at the kid who looked back at him with the same amazement. The kid looked at his controller and he wasn’t touching anything to make it go anymore but it was still going. The lil RC car, being as small as it was, was able to weave traffic all through town. It made its way through to the interstate where it only picked up speed. A few miles up the interstate was a state trooper on the lookout for speeders. He noticed an old man driving his car much slower than the rest of the traffic. Curious he aimed his radar gun at the old man. Just as his line of sight was clear, the lil RC car flew past the old mad in an instant before the officer could see it. The radar gun picked up the speed of the little RC car. The cop was baffled that the radar gun told him that the slow, old man was going 410 KPH. Meanwhile the lil RC car kept running.

Where will it go next?

Lil RC Car (critique requested)

oddeofreq

This is a random nonsensical thing i came up with. i thought it was funny so im sharing it.

Submission Information

Views:
137
Comments:
0
Favorites:
0
Rating:
General
Category:
Literary / Story