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First page in a little comic series I wanna work on. This is mostly to bring around some lore behind my character Makumbo Mubarak, and also practice drawing comics to improve how I go about them
I'll update this with more pages as I finish them.
Characters are->
Makumbo Mubarak -> (Me)
Phineas ( The nerdy elf, he's so cute. x.x ) -> Belong to Nevermoregingitsune on DeviantArt
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Thank you!
And yeah I agree. I'll be doing better with Page 2. I'm still a weeeeeee bit new to Comic making. But it's all learning!
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Chrysalis
Lovely art! The clear linework and lineless backgrounds give all the images a good sense of depth and atmosphere.
The dialogue is pretty hard to read, though - "It's all still junk to me" was the only section I didn't have to squint to read. It might help to make the text larger, or just make it plain black on the light-colored speech bubbles, unless there's a reason for it to be white with black borders.