If I was being super-critical, I'd say I'm not sure what's meant to be going on at the end, where he dissolves into a bunch of whooshing lines - is he running away? Did he accidentally blow himself up? Did the blast knock him off-screen? But that's a pretty minor criticism that I wouldn't even mention if you hadn't requested critique.
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Love it.
If I was being super-critical, I'd say I'm not sure what's meant to be going on at the end, where he dissolves into a bunch of whooshing lines - is he running away? Did he accidentally blow himself up? Did the blast knock him off-screen? But that's a pretty minor criticism that I wouldn't even mention if you hadn't requested critique.