Oooh man oh man. You really did learn a lot from just one previous pic of her! Right off the bat, I have to say, if you don't see it, I sure do...her breasts look great! They look so natural laying there, sprawled much like she is. You can really get a sense of gravity and weight on her chest from the position she is lying on towel! So much appreciation you took what I said into consideration, I think it paid off really quite well! ^w^

The obvious aside, something I really, really love, and it's a minor detail in this piece too, is your water. Sure, the water as a whole kind of looks like one solid, frozen mass, but heck man, work is highly difficult to draw! Especially still water, moving water, not as bad, but water that's kind of stagnant, definitely a challenge. What I'm working towards saying is you're ripple effect. It's the ripples in the water look wonderful!

Solid mass of water or not, you can easily tell her hand is delicately submerged into the pool, and that alone I just really enjoy.

Lastly, I just have to say, what a warm and inviting pose and scene you chose. She looks so content and at ease lying there, it just makes you want to pull out a towel, lay it down and lounge along the poolside with her!

I see you getting better and better Neon. Truly a great job on this charcoal piece. -w^